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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Demigod of the Feral Wood - Prologue

    Hey there. Neeson had never seen so many bodies. Good first paragraph. It immediately goes straight into the action and to the point. I think you can describe the corpses ...

    Nov 12, 2008


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